After completing the first draft of our music video we showed it to audience to hopefully gain some constructive feedback on our video. Upon showing our audience the video we received the following feedback:
- The narrative is clear and established well.
- There is a varied use of camera shots, framings and angles.
- There are significant issues with lighting in many of the shots.
- We have not effectively framed a substantial amount of our video.
- The narrative could be developed more with changes to mise en scene.
- In certain scenes it is unclear what writing on phones says.
- The use of camera angles could be used a lot better - with an emphasis on more close ups to show emotions and reactions to events.
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