ANCILLARY: MAGAZINE ADVERT TARGETS (PLANNING)

After receiving such remarks from our audience feedback we were given a number of targets that included changes to positioning, editing and typography to ultimately improve our magazine advert, these targets are;

Develop the logo as it doesn't signify what we want it to.

Needs more information on it as at the moment it does not follow conventions of magazine adverts.

Modify the placement of the text as it is compositionally not very good as it stands.