I met my new teacher this week, we discussed my coursework and she gave the following feedback:
- The narrative is not easy to follow.
- There is no actual concept that our video is based upon.
- Our video does not contain many conventions.
- It did not capture and hold the attention of the viewer.
- Editing techniques were poorly executed.
- Film more with the actors in it.
Therefore, I will change/do the following things to improve my work:
by 23/01/15
-complete new timeline and shotlist
- Include more angles and shots in sequences to make the narrative clear.
- Get rid of the conceptual element to the video.
- Research conventions to gain a better understanding of generic conventions, then include these.
- Ensure it is clearer and moves at a faster pace so the audience can follow the narrative and be interested in it.
- Watch editing tutorials to correctly edit certain shots.
- Use actors that can be easily contacted and filmed with.
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